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Is there any mistake in those English sentences?
My English needs improving.
I don't know whether thoese sentences are correct. So I need your help. Thanks a lot.
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Distinguished guests are just beautiful vase without essence. That is too pathetic. They can't even organize a whole sentence that makes sense. Too ridiculous!
Conclusion: To invite some distinguished guests have become a commonly seen form on most TV programs. And advice from those guests needs careful consideration sometimes.
What I have done is change only those errors which are absolutely ungrammatical. I have tried to leave almost everything else alone, even though a lot of your language is a bit stilted, awkward, and unconventional. As an example, you probably don't mean "distinguished guests," I think you probably mean something like celebrities, or celebrity guests, or, far more trendy these days, "talking heads," but I haven't made those kind of stylistic choices for you, limiting myself (almost) exclusively to clearly erroneous grammatical mistakes.
Distinguished guests are just beautiful FACES without SUBSTANCE. That is pathetic. They can't even COMPOSE a whole sentence that makes sense. Ridiculous!
Conclusion: To invite some distinguished guests HAS become a COMMON PHENOMENON on most TV programs. WHAT those guests HAVE TO SAY DEMANDS careful consideration .
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